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Literature
Under The Moonlight
Under The Moonlight
(girl to wolf)
Gasping for air and covered in sweat, Olivia awoke from a gruesome nightmare. In it she saw images of broken bodies, bloody corpses of her family and friends. She briefly saw a wolf like creature in the nightmare. She tried and tried to shake the images out of her head, but to no prevail they flashed over and over again. She couldn’t seem to go back to sleep. Even when she felt drowsy she would hear beast like snarls or howls outside her window. They didn’t sound like a typical dog, but like hell if she was going to go investigate. The grumbles and strange noised carried on until about three a.m
Literature
Lunacy: Becoming a Werewolf
By the time we managed to pull out of the little cabin that Krissie’s parents lived in, the sun was pretty much gone. I couldn’t really tell if it had set yet- spring was always the middle ground of sunset, not too early but not late- due to both the woods of northern Minnesota, and the overcast sky. By the time I turned our little Impala sedan on the highway south towards Minneapolis, it was starting to rain.
I kept down a sigh as I turned on the windshield wipers, only to see an empty road.
“We could have just spent the night, you know,” Krissie said from the passenger seat. “Mom and Dad always love having
Literature
The Change
The thorny bushes and thick underbrush tugged at her clothes as the girl sprinted through the forest. Her breath came in ragged gasps, and a dull throb started in her ribs. She ran blindly, forgoing the marked trails and heading as far into the dark forest as she could. She was terrified. The terror she felt caused a surge of adrenaline to rush through her veins, sending her flying even faster through the trees.
It was close. It was so very close. The thing she dreaded most was almost upon her. She could feel it in her blood and her limbs. She could see it in her speed and agility. She could smell it with her heig
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No the story that I said i was going to write in my last post on here, but a fun little project i threw together in an hour or so.
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This seems a bit rushed. There are several homophone errors (bear/bare, pail/pale) and typos. It's not up to your normal standard which is very good. The content is fun and imaginative, though, it just needs proper proofreading and grammar checking.
Sorry to rain on your parade, these are small niggles.
Sorry to rain on your parade, these are small niggles.