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Under The Moonlight
Under The Moonlight
(girl to wolf)
Gasping for air and covered in sweat, Olivia awoke from a gruesome nightmare. In it she saw images of broken bodies, bloody corpses of her family and friends. She briefly saw a wolf like creature in the nightmare. She tried and tried to shake the images out of her head, but to no prevail they flashed over and over again. She couldn’t seem to go back to sleep. Even when she felt drowsy she would hear beast like snarls or howls outside her window. They didn’t sound like a typical dog, but like hell if she was going to go investigate. The grumbles and strange noised carried on until about three a.m
Literature
Howl - Chapter One
Howl (A Werewolf Story)
Chapter One: The Mark
Face blushing; Devlin couldn’t fight a smile from forming. One hand clicked the computer off for the night while the other was mindless playing elsewhere, unable to hold back his baser needs from tonight’s “intimate” conversation. The fantasy him and his online lover, Patricia (A.K.A. LunaBlossom) played always made him feel this way, especially if Patricia was in one of her moods. She was wild when they played their little role play, and the fact they were so passionate about their characters made them both crave to be together and living the
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Werewolf Transformation
I walked into the night; the moon was full, a beautiful shining light in the sky. I was walking for a few minutes and the land began being more lush, the trees more bountiful, taller, untouched by a lumberjacks' axe. However, I wasn't here to look at the sights, no matter how beautiful they were. I was here for much more complicated, and painful reasons.
I had started into a jog, feeling the cold wind blasting my clothes, and when I felt I had gone deep enough into the forest, I sat down against a tree, waiting and bracing myself for the pain.
I had been sitting there for a few minutes, and then I felt a sharp and excruciating pain in my
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Sorry this took me so long to get something new together. I've had this written for sometime, just haven't had a chance to proof read it until now. Life is beginning to settle down a little for me thankfully. I'm thinking I might make this another novel type story, but explore the darker side of being a werewolf. What do you think? I know this one is kind of long.
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Great story, I really enjoyed it. Your first-person writing is incredible. I especially enjoyed how you focused a lot more on the transformation this time and didn't have as much sex.
A few things worth mentioning:
I really would've like to read about Chris's full transformation as well, from the first person. It was an interesting experiment to switch characters, but you alluded that there was a difference between a new werewolf's transformation and an experienced one. I think you should show the difference, besides, more first-person transformation scenes can only help, not hurt.
At the end you mention the dark leathery nose, but you never mentioned how she experienced her nose becoming dark and leathery. Extra details like that really help to complete the transformation scene. You already have so much detail, keep adding more!
You also mentioned quite a bit of things about the mental aspect of the transformation. Keep going with that! Maybe you could even sneak in some sex through that aspect of the transformation.
All in all, great job on this.
A few things worth mentioning:
I really would've like to read about Chris's full transformation as well, from the first person. It was an interesting experiment to switch characters, but you alluded that there was a difference between a new werewolf's transformation and an experienced one. I think you should show the difference, besides, more first-person transformation scenes can only help, not hurt.
At the end you mention the dark leathery nose, but you never mentioned how she experienced her nose becoming dark and leathery. Extra details like that really help to complete the transformation scene. You already have so much detail, keep adding more!
You also mentioned quite a bit of things about the mental aspect of the transformation. Keep going with that! Maybe you could even sneak in some sex through that aspect of the transformation.
All in all, great job on this.